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A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a food place for a holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went Where you stayed What you can do there and What the food was like

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Dear Mercy, I'm just writing to suggest a great place you can visit when you get time off work. As you know, I visited Dubai
last
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 year when I got
a
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2 weeks
leave
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 from work and it was a beautiful experience for me. I stayed at the
burj
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 al Arab hotel which was not expensive though it was close to an island, waking up to the view from my room was awesome and the service was top-notch. There are loads of things to do, but I know you love music concerts so I'll recommend you visit the Dubai opera and
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 the world of adventures for a thrilling ride. One of the reasons I chose to visit Dubai was because of
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 food. I can tell you for sure that it tastes great. When you get there, book a street food tour. Best wishes Grace
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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