IN MANY COUNTRIES, THE NUMBER OF ANIMALS AND PLANTS ARE DECLINING. WHY DO YOU THINK IT IS HAPPENING? HOW TO SOLVE THE ISSUE?
In
this
present world, technology and modern civilization are major roles in society. This
means our nature such
as animals and plants is more insignificant than ever because technology can substitute them. I am going to explain my notion about a cause and solution in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with, the cause is the expansion of a city
that has extremely increased in the recent decade, the area that used to be the home to wildlife
and the forest now getting invaded by a human. For instance
, a real estate company is looking for an area that will develop to be a luxury 5 star with quietness, peace and clams conditions. That means they can not develop into the
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city
because of these conditions then
they have to expand into a
nature like a jungle in order to get the private resort that will appropriate to the conditions. Remove the article
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Therefore
, the number of wildlife
creatures and forest are decreasing because of the
human need.
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However
, If this
problem came from the human so the solution must initiate with the human either. In order to solve ,this
we have to encourage our people and the government to issue regulations regarding animals and forest
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forests
For instance
, a city
must have a green area and park at least 1 place in the city
centre if it is possible and should be issued the laws regarding invading the jungle that is
unfriendly activities or harmfully actions to wildlife
and plants will be illegal. I think not only the
government need to pay Add a missing verb
does the
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an
attention but we all must seriously take interest either.
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human activities are causing too many problems the amount of Correct article usage
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wildlife
decreased is one of the vital problems. Thus
, in my opinion, everyone especially the government has to be concerned and pay more attention for solve this
issue. But if in the future the number of animals and plants still going down then
we all have to find a new better solution together because it will be extremely dangerous.Submitted by phuchanate on
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