IN MANY COUNTRIES, THE NUMBER OF ANIMALS AND PLANTS ARE DECLINING. WHY DO YOU THINK IT IS HAPPENING? HOW TO SOLVE THE ISSUE?

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present world, technology and modern civilization are major roles in society.
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means our nature
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as animals and plants is more insignificant than ever because technology can substitute them. I am going to explain my notion about a cause and solution in the following paragraphs.
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with, the cause is the expansion of a
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that has extremely increased in the recent decade, the area that used to be the home to
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and the forest now getting invaded by a human.
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, a real estate company is looking for an area that will develop to be a luxury 5 star with quietness, peace and clams conditions. That means they can not develop into
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city
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because of these conditions
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they have to expand into
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nature like a jungle in order to get the private resort that will appropriate to the conditions.
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, the number of
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creatures and forest are decreasing because of
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human need.
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, If
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problem came from the human so the solution must initiate with the human either. In order to solve ,
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we have to encourage our people and the government to issue regulations regarding animals and
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.
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, a
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must have a green area and park at least 1 place in the
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centre if it is possible and should be issued the laws regarding invading the jungle
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unfriendly activities or harmfully actions to
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and plants will be illegal. I think not only
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government need to pay
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attention but we all must seriously take interest either. In conclusion,
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human activities are causing too many problems the amount of
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decreased is one of the vital problems.
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, in my opinion, everyone especially the government has to be concerned and pay more attention for solve
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issue. But if in the future the number of animals and plants still going down
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we all have to find a new better solution together because it will be extremely dangerous.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • urbanization
  • deforestation
  • agricultural expansion
  • pollution control
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • renewable energy
  • sustainable practices
  • overexploitation
  • invasive species
  • conservation
  • quarantine measures
  • eradication programs
  • public awareness campaigns
  • habitat destruction
  • climate change
  • natural habitats
  • species decline
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