In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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It is predicted that the

printet

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printed

books

and newspapers will be replaced by cutting-edge devices

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since they will be more accessible without

costing

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.To be honest, I am convinced that it is a

usless

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idea to

stopped

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utilizing

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printed

books

Firstly

,the authors and the reporters suffer from

this

topic so that if the

volums

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volumes

volume

and the magazines are going to be free, their incomes would be removed and day by day the authors will be leave writing.

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not only will both the useful

books

and magazines

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but

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also

the meaningless ones are more popular.

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another dire consequences

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such

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effects on society, I mean that countries require the folks who are educated and

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literate

literature

.When the range of volumes transmit to trivial

books

, over time

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lack of education will

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.It is better to protect traditional methods. Apart from what is concerned about before, I agree that it can have some positive footprints.Due to some citizens are not

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it will be

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them accustomed to reading

books

.Since electronic

books

are easier and cheaper.

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by creating

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social media with influencers,

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the

books

are more attractive. To wrap up what was mentioned above,I believe that the satisfaction of authors is more important in humans life.

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, governments must

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free electronic

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to neither the number of writers be reduced nor the

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of readers be diminished.

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1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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4 paragraphs

239 words

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Complete response

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Fully explain your ideas

the process of Pu-erh Raw tea and Ripe tea. make a summary regarding the given diagram

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