your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure center that it runs in order to save money write a letter to the city council
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you today because I have heard that the city administration is going to close the local club.
As a result
, I am informing you today about how its existence is quintessential for us.
First
of all, the gym is being used for plenty of purposes by me personally and also
the family. These purposes range from exercising regularly to bodybuilding. However
, more importantly, it serves as a social meeting place. Hence
, missing it can cause some malignant psychological and physical consequences on the local population.
Moreover
, the local community use the green space provided by that location for entertaining themselves and also
their pets. In fact, there are unfortunately no other open-space areas that can offer alternative outdoor activities chances.
Therefore
, if this
amenity was shut down, it would cause some serious effects and would upset the neighbourhood. I believe that it will impact the health of the local population, increasing cardiovascular diseases prevalence and other detrimental mental effects.
Finally
, I am looking forward to your reply. You can always reach me via email.
Faithfully yours,
Youssef Abo-DahabSubmitted by youssef.nageh on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite