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Since most information about culture and history can be found on the internet museums are not needed any more. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the
internet
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 has grown at a faster speed beyond everyone's imagination. Some
people
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 believe that most
information
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 about
culture
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 and
history
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 can be searched on the
internet
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 and
museums
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 are not needed anymore, while others think that
museums
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 have still played a significant role in modern
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.
This
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 essay will discuss both perspectives and give my opinion about why I think that
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 should still be needed in contemporary
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 for several reasons. On the one hand, it is generally accepted that the
internet
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 has changed humans' daily life totally.
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, it changes not only our viewpoints toward
culture
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 but
also
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 our
values
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 towards
history
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. To be more specific, it can be said that
people
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 in modern
society
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 can search for a lot of
information
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 about
culture
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 and
history
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 on the
internet
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 for free. Because of
this
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 reason, most
information
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 related to
culture
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,
history
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 or arts can be found directly on the
internet
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 without paying any fees, and many
people
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 will think that
museums
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 may not be needed anymore;
however
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, these
people
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 forget that some artworks,
culture
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 and
history
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 displayed or demonstrated in the
museums
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 still have their
values
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 for some seniors or minors who may not have enough opportunities to use the
internet
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.
On the other hand
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, it can be suggested that some cultural experts or historians support that
museums
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 still have their
values
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 and functions in modern
society
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.
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 to say, these
museums
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 can preserve something critical that the
internet
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 can not replace.
Although
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 current technology is so advanced that digital
museums
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 can be visited by online surfers at home directly, some artworks, cultures or
history
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 still have special meanings for nationals and their countries.
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, most
information
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 about
history
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 and
culture
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such
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 as some songs or written texts can be valuable and priceless that nothing can replace. In conclusion, it can be asserted that
museums
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 still have their
values
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 and functions in contemporary
society
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 and should not be abandoned because of their priceless
values
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 and important meanings to their citizens or nations.
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