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your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure center that it runs in order to save money write a letter to the city council

#council #sport #leisure #center #money #city
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Dear sir, I am Praveena and located at 15 Rajan street, and I have resided in the place past 10 years under your local body council. I am writing
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 letter to let you know that share my opinion about closing a sport and
leisure
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 centre that in your local city council.
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 of all, when we heard the news about the closing of a
leisure
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 centre in our area everyone is sad including my family and friends, at that place we have so many joys,
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 memorable moments.
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,
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 centres to save money in the order is consider your local city council. In general, we spent most of the time like weekends and holidays to interact with people in the
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 centre. Not only us, surrounding and circle people they are creating a social activity like folks and games. Thanks for your consideration order and I hopefully waiting for your reply. Kind Regards Praveena
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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