People have a lot of opinions about the value of advanced education. Which do you think is the most important reason to attend college or university?

Nowadays, people prefer to go to

university

after completing high

school

. which was not very common in the past. I think

this

is really a good idea. In my opinion, I

also

prefer to have an advanced

education

for a good career. I feel

this

way for two reasons which I will explore in

this

essay.

first

of all,

advance

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education

is a prerequisite for a good

job

. Today, if one

want

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to have better work in

high

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a high

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repute environment,

then

university

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degree

is

must

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.

otherwise

, nice

job

prospectus

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prospects

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are

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very less.

for instance

, one of my

friend

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friends

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in high

school

was not interested in

studies

. so, after completing high

school

, he applied for

job

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the job

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but because of

lack

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a lack

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of

degree

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,degree

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he is not working

at

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his desired position.

As a result

,he is now planning to study

further

. he has joined evening classes

in

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at

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the

university

, which he can continue with the

job

. if he has given attention to his

studies

after completing high

school

,

then

today he will be working

at

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some

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good position with

good

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salery

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salary

.

secondly

, is

the

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networking. advanced

education

at

university

also

gives us the

oppourtunity

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opportunity

to communicate with different varieties of people.

subsequently

, my communication skills

also

get

enchanced

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enhanced

. we

also

get

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opportunity

oppoutunity

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to study in groups, which makes us more flexible. my own experience is a compelling example of

this

. in high

school

I do not have so

much

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friends. I was very much focused

to

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my

studies

only. I hardly participated in any of my

school

program

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. after coming to

university

I realise the importance of communication and working in a group. I not only completed my

degree

with good grades but now I

also

have a good network of friends. in a nutshell, I strongly believe that

,

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advanced

education

is

must

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a must

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for everyone. because of

career

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the career

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option

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and networking skills,

degree

studies

playes

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plays

played

a significant role

life

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in life

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.