Some people prefer to buy local products while others prefer international products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some
people
might say local
prodacts
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products
are prefer
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than
brand
products
. If the
products
is
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are
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good
builing
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building
the buying a local
produts
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products
product
in
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is
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not
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a not
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bad choice. sometimes we expensive bad with other
countiries
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countries
brands
also
ther
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there
are
expensivie
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expensive
too. on the one hand, our country and government
tyr
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try
to convince the public to use
thire
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their
own homemade and avoid buying
a
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cheape products
a cheape product
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cheape
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cheap
cheaper
products
like made
in
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by Asian
conutries
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countries
. If we only
buying
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buy
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the local shop product for our daily routine we
are support
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support
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our government
also
our
conutry
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country
gets strong
ever
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every
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year. The benefit of homemade
products
are
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is
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the
availiablty
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availability
available
of things is
alwasy
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always
easy
for
people
and quality is not
compromis
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compromised
compromise
. while the other
opinin
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opinion
is very
diffrent
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different
people
believe that, if we
buying
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buy
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sometings
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something
somethings
expensive and
brand
goods, it
is keep
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is kept
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longer than cheap
products
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therefore
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therefor
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therefore
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, more and more
people
buying
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buy
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the international
brand
shop. As result, the quality of
international
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the international
an international
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item
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items
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is extremely quality
is
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and is
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good for
continue
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continuing
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to use for a long time.
However
,
price
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the price
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is very expensive
of
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for
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the
brand
products
of the
people
who
able
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are able
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to buy international
products
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • durability
  • sustainability
  • longevity
  • affordability
  • consumerism
  • waste
  • environmental impact
  • value for money
  • customer satisfaction
  • brand loyalty
  • consumption
  • economic growth
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