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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Children are the backbone of the country. I strongly think they should do any sort of social work or service in their leisure hours which can be useful for the society and for them as well. The analysis contained in the following paragraphs will explain
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 appropriate way. As it is said 'A man is known by his characters', I believe doing social work without pay will help in building
character
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 of the teenagers. They will develop
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a feeling
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feeling
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feelings
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 of self-confidence.
This
 can
also
 help in learning various attributes
such
 as being humble, polite, generous, punctual and
more over
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 being social. Nowadays in
this
 technology era, it is important to be involved in good works rather than wasting time in unuseful ways. For instance,
on
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 of my friend is busy on weekends
for
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raising funds for charity through exhibitions.
This
 has transformed her a lot by developing a sense of being helpful to
needy's
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Furthermore
, it can help a number of people who are poor or in need of support. As these people do not have enough funds for raising their children in a good school.
Such
 kinds of social acts can benefit them a lot. To sum up, I would like to say children and youth have the capabilities to transform themselves and
the
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 communities in a far better way by organizing and engaging in different social activities.
This
 will indeed make them better human
being
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beings
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 and responsible
citizen
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citizens
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 which will eventually help in the growth and development of
nation
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the nation
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • required
  • unpaid
  • community work
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • life skills
  • volunteering
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • socially aware
  • responsible
  • interact
  • diverse backgrounds
  • cultural understanding
  • tolerance
  • work experience
  • essential skills
  • employment
  • interests
  • passions
  • career development
  • contribute
  • betterment
  • development
  • local community
  • mental well-being
  • stress
  • self-esteem
  • burden
  • academic
  • personal lives
  • time management
  • support
  • balance
  • participate
  • encouraged
  • numerous benefits
  • individuals
  • conclusion
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