It is often thought that the increase in juveniles crime can be attributed to violence in the media. Do you agree that this is the main cause of juvenile crime? What solution can you offer to deal with this situation?

The high level of crime committed by teenagers is often linked to the

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action they watch in the

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assertion, and I believe parental guidance and government regulations will curb

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activity. Juvenile crime has become a global

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and the major causes are

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social

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and moves. The

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of technology and mass production of cutting edge

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has given room for

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and swift circulation of

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to

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regardless of their age,

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information

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sometimes

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violence

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and can easily influence the mind of a minor.

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passed through films or

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platforms like

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instagram

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twitter

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and many more.

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, there was a recent case of a boy who killed his teenage girlfriend for

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ritual, when he was questioned about what triggered his actions he said he came across the

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on the internet and he wanted to give it a try.

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rampant issue can be reduced if parents pay attention to what their children get exposed to and

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guide them to better understand that some actions they watch or read on the

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should not be

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. In the same

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,

government

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should create agencies that see into

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the dissemination

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of

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to young citizens.

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has recently designed a regulation that stops minors to purchase

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devices that can expose them to harmful

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. In conclusion, juvenile offences

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become rampant and

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of the

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been blamed for it,

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however

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if parents and the government take

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certain measures

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can be reduced.