Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.

Nowadays , giving capital punishment is the leading culprit in some of the developing countries in

this

modern society . There is a hot dispute that some people strongly agree with the death penalty whereas some think that , actually , it is not necessary . I will discuss both views and state my opinion in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with , there are several reasons

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death

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sentence.

First

of all , it is not sure that a criminal will get regret

after

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imprisonment

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period . He might infringe the regulations again . He may victimize the

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affected family again with a feeling of spite.

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, a person who commits

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felony

such

as rape deserves the death warrant because he may probably do that action a

second

time to the victim or he may change his target to another one even though he had been punished .

Secondly

, the regime should take effective retribution

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terrorism as a model for successors who have

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or who are thinking about the Heinous criminal activities . As a consequence , they might have fear as it is natural that human beings are afraid to die .

On the other hand

, there are some downsides

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judicial execution . There may be innocent people among those who were executed.

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, the real criminal may probably substitute another one with money

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, if it happens , the government and the public will never know the actual evidence and it is unfair for the replaced family .

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some offenders have to infringe vigorous regulations according to their essential situations . They are more likely to get repent after they have been punished .

This

is exemplified by giving a

second

chance to them to enlighten their mistakes. To conclude , I believe that legalized killing is crucial for capital crimes and I totally advocate the statement

although

there are some drawbacks .