Should humans adapt to technology or should technology adapt to us? Is technology making us intellectually weaker or more intelligent? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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, my participation in different competitions like GESR innovative in MASR ELKHERE society, EBTEKAR, YOMKEN and made in Egypt has played an important role in enhancing my
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and academic skills.
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, the main attributes of my experience were leading in student activities in my faculty, which concerned to implementation of scientific projects and activating the role of the student in collective action, responsibility and leadership.
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, I established a team called “Brainy academy”, which
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to teach children the concepts of science and
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they entered various competitions like minesweeper international completion, which aims to make a robot to find the mines, which played a vital role in improving my leadership skills. I hope to obtain someday a job as a university professor. I am attracted to
this
lifestyle, the freedom to decide what one wants to
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and the stimulation of the academic community. I am interested in how engineering can be applied in our daily life to enhance the well-being of humans. Studying for
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, I feel, will provide ample opportunities to involve myself in my areas of interest. Experiencing the challenges and rewards of exploring new relationships between ideas and facts, acquiring expertise with tools and methods central to my discipline and thereby honing my creative insights and abilities are some of the expectations in my mind for pursuing graduate study and
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work.
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, it will enhance and develop my skills and will definitely increase the opportunities for my career growth, promotion and achievement
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long-term career goal to join a highly reputable university/institute that offers me a constructive workplace for pursuing my
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in Electrical and Computer Engineering field as well my academic work.
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the end, thank you for the opportunity to express my views. I hope that I satisfy the criteria for admission along with a possible financial aid. An assistantship in any encouraging field would give me
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consideration and looking forward to being associated with you.
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