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Weldination should assist poor countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters do you agree or disagree

#weldination #countries #relief #disasters
There is an opinion that developer
Nations
 should get fundamental aid from affluent
countries
 when they face natural calamities. I find
this
 statement logical since poor
countries
 are helpless to protect their country in hard times because of their critical financial status and wealthy
Nations
 should save mankind or a gardenless of nationality. The government of destitute
countries
 already manage their basic services hardly and when suddenly any disaster hit them, they feel overburdened. Even the
people
 of
such
 nationalities are innocent and faultless but they have to pay a huge price. In most cases, they become homeless and starvation troubles them a lot. Despite the best efforts by their government, they have no choice but to live in Complex situations. Take, Pakistan,
for example
, where tsunamis occur after several years and
people
 near the coastal areas lose everything, so monetary assistance from these
nations
 can be a lifesaver for them.
Secondly
, fluent
countries
 should actively participate in helping those
countries
 which are poor and going through any challenging times.
This
 is because protecting humanity is the key prerogative of every Nation without considering their citizenship needless to say Independence
countries
 have unlimited resources
such
 as wealth manpower and foresightedness which can effectively save many lives during natural disasters
for example
 India reaches every corner of the world where ever
people
 need them no matter who they are and where do they live they provide them all the basic facilities is sure as food shelter medication clothes etcetera. In conclusion, European
countries
 must lend their helping hand to the poor
countries
 in the time of any natural calamity because poverty-strict
nations
 are unable to provide basic amenities to their
people
 and prosperous
nations
 should make it obligatory to ensure help to these
people
.
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