Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inquire
some
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about some
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information about a computer
course
that is
being offered by your college. I saw an advertisement on a website that your college is arranging an information security training session.
Therefore
, I want to know
that is
there any chance for me to attend
this
training? Basically, I did a
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degree in Human Resource Management and I don't have any proper computer education. Unfortunately,
this
course
is required that I must have completed an elementary
course
in computing. According to the advertisement, I am not eligible to become a part of
this
training. Computer security is my
most
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favourite field, it is my top priority to participate in
this
session.
However
, could you please update me if any special exception can be made for me
.
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It would be a great assist for me if you can give me a chance to learn from
this
course
. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Hafiz Mahmood Hussain
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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