These days, too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine, rather than by following a healthy lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The importance of depending on human health to a doctor or a healthy

lifestyle

which was always debatable has now become more controversial,

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crowds claiming that it is beneficial while others reject

this

notion. The substantial influence of

this

trend has sparked, controversy over the potential impact in recent years.I fully agree with

this

statement because sometimes we should ignore the other factors. Analyzing the statement and explaining the

further

,

first

and foremost reason behind

this

is that nowadays environmental pollution level is higher than in the past and

therefore

hazardous effect is should be reduced by doctors and medicine. Another striking benefit in

this

regard is chemical vegetables, fruits and fast food. Categorically discussing, it cannot be ignored that the main reason behind

this

is that sedentary

lifestyle

.

Thus

,

people

must not opt healthy

lifestyle

and prefer choosing medical methods. Probing ahead, the main underlying reason steam the fact is that,today there are so many

people

have not money for going to the hospital. Moving

further

, it is pertinent to mention that an active

lifestyle

is not suitable for a minority of

people

.

Hence

, it is a good option for these

people

to use the medicine.

Although

some good methods should do healthy person, in the modern era effect is limited. Apart from

reasons

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mentioned above, it can be clearly stated why many are in favour of

this

trend. To conclude, according to the statement aforementioned above one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of going to the medicine on a daily basis are

indeed

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to

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great to ignore.