Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Several solutions are being offered by experts to address the problem of pollution and traffic jams, and among them, it is said that increasing the price of oil could be the best

one

.

However

, I believe

this

solution

is not practical and there are other methods that can combat

this

matter in better ways. It has been seen that increasing prices of products

has

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failed to deter humans from the things they enjoy.

One

can take the example of the unsuccessful rise in

cigarrette

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cigarette

price, which failed to prevent humans from smoking.

Similarly

, Since private cars lead to

mankind

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convenience and promote laziness, which mankind enjoys

alot

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a lot

, even expensive petrol will not mitigate

this

problem. To exemplify

further

, each household has more than

one

car and the family

generousely

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generously

pays all extra expenses to comfort themselves albeit

one

car is enough for most of them.

Therefore

,

this

solution

can not and will not have the

desirable

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outcome.

Although

the above so-called

solution

is not workable,

this

concern can be tackled with other methods.

First

of all, electronic vehicles can

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transportation

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industry. If each person has

an

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one

-passenger electronic vehicle, both air pollution and traffic jams will decrease.

This

is because they do not produce

exhust

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exhaust

fumes and the

one

-passenger cars are much smaller than current fuel ones. Another

solution

to address it is for governments to improve

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public

transportation

. As

it

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mentioned above, the reason for people using private cars is their

conveniency

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convenience

.

Consequently

, by improving public

transportation

, they will be encouraged to use them more.

For example

, increasing the number of buses leads to flexibility of their passengers to use them based on their

varieble

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variable

varied

timelines. To sum up, mitigating air pollution and the traffic problem is difficult

to

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say the least and can not be done by increasing the price of petrol. I am convinced that electronic vehicles and

a

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better public

transportation

are more effective.