Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
bullying is one of the most common challenges for the educational centres, for
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causes
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the causes
This
essay will explain the roots of this
phenomenon as well as some possible alternatives to fight it.
firstly
, some of the causes of this
situation are linked with
family education. usually, bullies are children who do not have Change preposition
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adequate support from their parents and try to exteriorise their frustration with others. Remove the article
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for example
, a child who is physically punished by his father usually tends to do the same with his peers. In addition
, the lack of confidence and emotional support from the
loved ones is the Correct article usage
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second
reason, for
instance
each day the number of youngsters who prefer to avoid talking with their Add the comma(s)
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parents
increases and it fosters abusive Change to a genitive case
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conducts
in school environments.
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Although
this
situation seems uncontrollable, there are some solutions to reduce its presence. I suggest improving communication with us, their
relatives, developing trustable relationships will increase their self-esteem and recognise that if they are Correct word choice
and their
in
risk, we can help them to avoid it. Change preposition
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furthermore
, the most important method is modifying parenting guidelines because the school can establish many strategies but if the family continues with prejudicial ways to solve conflicts, children will continue copying them on
their community. An example of Change preposition
in
this
could be implementing positive discipline and as Jane Nelsen says create
only logical consequences in case of undesirable behaviour.
to conclude, the variables that generate bullying situations are the same that we need to attack; family and social skills, foundations for everyone's life. Wrong verb form
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Therefore
, it is time to improve the education at home and provide opportunities to dialogue without judgment, always supporting and teaching them how to act, parents’ ears must be always ready to listen and help.Submitted by gabrielapineros on
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