Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawabacks?
Nowadays, there has been a dramatic increase in the number of
students
Use synonyms
preffering
to migrate to different Correct your spelling
preferring
countries
for their personal educational enhancement. Studying abroad has become a quintessential part of life for most Use synonyms
of
the prosperous Change preposition
apply
students
to gain more expertise in their Use synonyms
relevent
field of study, thereby providing more positive benefits for themselves as well as the Correct your spelling
relevant
countries
where they are pursuing higher education. Use synonyms
This
essay elucidates how Linking Words
this
trend has a significant Linking Words
postive
impact in both Correct your spelling
positive
of
the cases.
Change preposition
apply
To begin
with, considering the Linking Words
postive
Correct your spelling
positive
outcomes
of studying abroad, Use synonyms
students
are benefitted the most as compared to the nations, since it allows them to gain knowledge from the best researchers and professors around the world who are teaching Use synonyms
world class
education in these esteemed organizations . Add a hyphen
world-class
In
Linking Words
addition
, to Use synonyms
these quality
of learning, it Change the determiner
this quality
these qualities
also
provides Linking Words
further
Linking Words
research
opportunities, better financial Use synonyms
stabiliy
or Correct your spelling
stability
employement
in Correct your spelling
employment
world's
top Correct article usage
the world's
organization
. Fix the agreement mistake
organizations
This
not only Linking Words
affect
student personallyChange the verb form
affects
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
provide huge income because of the increase in Linking Words
Use synonyms
research
and Correct article usage
the research
development
sector for most Use synonyms
of
the Change preposition
apply
countries
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
countries
where Use synonyms
student
Fix the agreement mistake
students
pursue
higher education Change the verb form
pursues
also
receive value Linking Words
recommendation
from these Fix the agreement mistake
recommendations
students
leading to a better global ranking thereby causing more investment in these universities Use synonyms
For instance
, considering CIT (California Institute of Linking Words
technology
) has the highest foreign investment of around 40.10 million dollars because of the extensive Change the capitalization
Technology
research
Use synonyms
outcomes
and Use synonyms
outcomes
provided by Use synonyms
this
university. Linking Words
In
Linking Words
addition
, most of Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
research
is driven by immigrants from Asian Use synonyms
countries
. On Use synonyms
an
Correct article usage
apply
average
most of these foreign Add a comma
,average
students
generally land Use synonyms
a
high paying jobs due to Correct article usage
apply
proximity
to Bay year and Correct pronoun usage
their proximity
excellent
reputation of the university.
Correct article usage
the excellent
However
, considering these merits there are some drawbacks involved as well for the pupils themselves as well as the country from which they originate. Linking Words
Firstly
, the Linking Words
countries
from which these Use synonyms
students
belongUse synonyms
to
are deprived of the original national talent eventually causing a paucity of Change preposition
apply
workforce
for Add an article
the workforce
Use synonyms
development
of these Add an article
the development
countries
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, due to which more jobs are left open causing lesser production of Linking Words
indegenous
goods and more reliance on foreign goods. Correct your spelling
indigenous
In
Linking Words
addition
to that Use synonyms
such
nations Linking Words
also
lack the necessary financial growth and Linking Words
further
economical enhancement. Linking Words
For instance
, Linking Words
developing
Change preposition
in developing
country
like India where nearly 40% Fix the agreement mistake
countries
percent
of the population migrate to different Change the spelling
per cent
countries
to study has eventually caused the overall GDP (gross domestic product) to be decreased by 30%, Use synonyms
Linking Words
furthermore
the overall foreign investment has Add a comma
,furthermore
also
decreased due to decrease in the financial Linking Words
development
of these nations. Use synonyms
In
Linking Words
addition
to these, Use synonyms
students
are Use synonyms
also
live far away from Linking Words
parents
causing Correct pronoun usage
their parents
the
lack of physical contact Correct article usage
a
to
them which may cause various mental problems like depression because no one to comfort them in the foreign land.
To conclude, Change preposition
with
students
have great positive Use synonyms
outcomes
personally when they migrate to other Use synonyms
countries
which outweigh the drawbacks. Use synonyms
However
, all the Linking Words
outcome
of their effort Fix the agreement mistake
outcomes
contribute
Change the verb form
contributes
for
Change preposition
to
Use synonyms
development
of the nation from which they graduate.Add an article
the development
Submitted by vedang.parasnis921 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.