Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawabacks?

Nowadays, there has been a dramatic increase in the number of
students
preffering
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preferring
to migrate to different
countries
for their personal educational enhancement. Studying abroad has become a quintessential part of life for most
of
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the prosperous
students
to gain more expertise in their
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relevant
field of study, thereby providing more positive benefits for themselves as well as the
countries
where they are pursuing higher education.
This
essay elucidates how
this
trend has a significant
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positive
impact in both
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the cases.
To begin
with, considering the
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positive
outcomes
of studying abroad,
students
are benefitted the most as compared to the nations, since it allows them to gain knowledge from the best researchers and professors around the world who are teaching
world class
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education in these esteemed organizations .
In
addition
, to
these quality
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of learning, it
also
provides
further
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opportunities, better financial
stabiliy
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stability
or
employement
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employment
in
world's
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top
organization
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organizations
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.
This
not only
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student personally
,
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but
also
provide huge income because of the increase in
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and
development
sector for most
of
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the
countries
.
Moreover
, the
countries
where
student
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students
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pursue
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higher education
also
receive value
recommendation
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recommendations
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from these
students
leading to a better global ranking thereby causing more investment in these universities
For instance
, considering CIT (California Institute of
technology
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) has the highest foreign investment of around 40.10 million dollars because of the extensive
research
outcomes
and
outcomes
provided by
this
university.
In
addition
, most of
this
research
is driven by immigrants from Asian
countries
. On
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average
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most of these foreign
students
generally land
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high paying jobs due to
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to Bay year and
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reputation of the university.
However
, considering these merits there are some drawbacks involved as well for the pupils themselves as well as the country from which they originate.
Firstly
, the
countries
from which these
students
belong
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are deprived of the original national talent eventually causing a paucity of
workforce
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for
development
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of these
countries
.
Secondly
, due to which more jobs are left open causing lesser production of
indegenous
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indigenous
goods and more reliance on foreign goods.
In
addition
to that
such
nations
also
lack the necessary financial growth and
further
economical enhancement.
For instance
,
developing
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country
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countries
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like India where nearly 40%
percent
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of the population migrate to different
countries
to study has eventually caused the overall GDP (gross domestic product) to be decreased by 30%,
furthermore
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the overall foreign investment has
also
decreased due to decrease in the financial
development
of these nations.
In
addition
to these,
students
are
also
live far away from
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their parents
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causing
the
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lack of physical contact
to
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them which may cause various mental problems like depression because no one to comfort them in the foreign land. To conclude,
students
have great positive
outcomes
personally when they migrate to other
countries
which outweigh the drawbacks.
However
, all the
outcome
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of their effort
contribute
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for
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development
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the development
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of the nation from which they graduate.
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