Social media is having a negative impact on people's lives nowadays. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Support your answer with reasons and examples.

Nowadays,
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social
media
playes
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plays
players
important
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an important
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role
for
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human life. So, some
people
consider that social
media
is having a negative impact on
people
's lives. I partially agree with those
people
. To start with,
the
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social
media
can simplify
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everyday
everyday's
everdays
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life
of
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the
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people
.
For example
,
people
can meet each other through
the
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facebook
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,
instagram
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and others.
In addition
,
people
can get any information they want via social
media
. Sometimes, they can pay some
payment
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payments
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by
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internet
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the internet
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. All those things help to save time and cost during
this
busiest life. Alternatively, social
media
has a positive impact on
people
's lives.
For example
, there
are
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so
many
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fake and false information on social
media
. Because
,
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those information
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possible
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to wash
people
's
brain
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brains
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.
Moreover
, social
media
can be one of the tools for
commiting
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committing
some kind of
crime
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crimes
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such
as kidnapping and financial
scam
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. As well as, social
media
can be harmful
for
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young children.
Therefore
,
people
need to balance proper usage of social
media
in order to avoid any positive
effect
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effects
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of that.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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