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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The picture below shows the plant of museum in 1998 and after some changes was made in 2008. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

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This
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 image illustrates the
museum
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 in 1998 and its plan happened for 2008. It is clear from the graph that they use large spaces were not used and that changes just inside the
museum
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. According to what is shown, after the entrance and exit place for tickets did not shift at all while the middle of the
museum
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 has had a garden but, in 2008 fell with the garden, fountains, and cafe sitting area and the cafe upper that place.
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 on the right side have had some shops
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 return the all right empty and the shops went to the opposite shift. While in 1998 the
museum
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 has no restaurant until 2008 put one in the left corner.
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, temporary exhibition room. To sum up, we could say that the permanent exhibition room set is the same as in the past.
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,
museum
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 pictures in the
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 period have huge unused spaces while in the
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 age start to be more useful.
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