Some feel that cities shold be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

People

think that towns must be constructed in the way for proper functioning than to appear pleasant. I will elaborate

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essay by discussing

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both sides and why proper functioning is more important than looking pretty. Nowadays, places must be drafted in

such

a way that it helps the

people

work efficiently on their jobs rather than get messed up with problems.

In other words

, construction

cities

must follow through

proper

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structure

among

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arranging the equipment for better functioning.

Moreover

, locating and analysing the places need a more efficient design for which it must be adapted

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to work in a better environment.

For example

, Concentrating on Roads and parking lots in

cities

is more important for better reduce in traffic problems.

on the other hand

, A pleasant design of

cities

may

inresult

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result

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good impression through the Tourister and living local

people

. Even though

,

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the arrangement on the working of

cities

or not proper they could appreciate among the beauty of the

cities

architecture and looks of the building can create a good impression on the

people

and they could feel a praised with the world and

also

to

costruct

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construct

a place for the sculpture.

For instance

, Rome is the smallest place which impresses the

people

's

heart

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for

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kind

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of sculpture even though, it is not properly

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among other

cities

in the same nation. In conclusion,

cities

must be designed in the proper way of functioning.

Moreover

, It can be

also

slightly rearranged to modify it slightly beautiful.