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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can peoplw research this?

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It is widely acknowledged that most people are perceived the history of their living
place
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, houses or accommodations should be found out. In
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 essay, the reasons and the way how they research the background of their residences will be clarified in the following paragraph. Urbanisation has risen since the 21st century began,and a number of houses were built with a higher population. There are many factors for building a new living
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 that brought various behind stories.
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 and foremost, there are new expending of families after some young couples got married, they decided to settle as a nuclear family and left their parents' house. The
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 supporting reason is related to the environmental problems, when there was an event of natural disaster, people need to evacuate from those areas. Changing their jobs is one of the related aspects of relocating and finding a new
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 to live and the house owner chose the architecture and the design for building their living places for connection with their careers.
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, there are many scientific and non-scientific papers supporting the background of houses. The histories of the living places could be searched from internet sources,
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, they need to be proven and verified genuinely.
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,they probably confirmed with the encyclopedias or some local wisdom book ,
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, we could read them from anecdotes. In conclusion, there are many backgrounds and storytelling that should be discussed and studied
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 in their living places. There are many benefits to learning the introductions to each living
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, it was conceived as one of the roots of their cultures and should be continued to the younger generation.
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