In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays,
adverts
become very popular in order to attract many customers. Most
companies
point out in
adverts
that their
products
are brand new to persuade
people
to buy their goods. In
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I will provide my opinion
why
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on why
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companies
do
in
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apply
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this
way
as well as
advantages
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the advantages
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and disadvantages .
Also
, I think that it is a negative development
to
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our society.
Firstly
, businesses are indicating that their
products
are news due to the fact of some psychological reasons. They use
this
technique to convince
theirs
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customers
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that if they do not buy their brand new
products
, they are not up to date.
Secondly
, there are many same
products
in
market
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so if they want
people
to buy their
products
, they use
this
kind of method to advertise their goods.
As a result
,
people
will be fooled that their
products
are different from others and their
products
will be purchased.
Lastly
, if more
people
are demanding their
products
, it will lead to global warming as well as air pollution due to the production process.
On the other hand
, it
also
has a positive impact in some ways.
First
,
companies
are advertising their
products
in
this
way
because
theirs
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ideas or
design
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designs
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can not be copied by other competitors .
For example
, if Apple
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announces
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its logo in
adverts
, others can not use its logo since most
people
already noticed
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it from
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from
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in
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adverts
.
Also
, the
companies
will be increased their sell rate by advertising in
this
way
, In conclusion,
business
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businesses
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are doing
in
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apply
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this
way
to get more profit from
people
.
Although
it has a negative impact on buyers, it
also
has its advantages in the place of
companies
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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