The teaching of information technology has become a standard part of the curriculum in most secondary schools. The same is now happening in primary schools, where children as young as six are learning how to use computers. However, there is a danger that IT skills are being taught at the expense of more basic skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Information
technology
plays a crucial role as a part of the module in most secondary schools. Children
who are in primary school also
have been taught this
skill. Although
it is said that there are a few drawbacks to teaching technical skills
at a young age, I partially disagree with this
opinion and I will explain other reasons in this
essay.
On one
hand, instructions on technical knowledge for youngsters at schools might be a burden for them as they will not be able to cope with every skill at once. Correct article usage
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Moreover
, basic skills
like social and moral skills
are more compulsory to young students and these skills
have to make a
way for Correct article usage
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technology
if it involves
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is involved
children
’s curriculum. Most importantly, without proper guidance, technology
will be a toxic substance to an underaged person and it is ruining childhood. For instance
, young students have been targeted and harmed by digitized technologies such
as cyberbullying.
On the other hand
, it is argued that children
today are the leaders for tomorrow and they should establish a foundation of technical knowledge at their schools due to
their brain development starts at the age of five. In addition
, as technological advancement provides an endless supply of learning resources, it will encourage spontaneous learning and will excite young students. Besides
, technology
is a cost-effective alternative to traditional materials and opens up new possibilities for children
's collaboration. For example
, children
can be attracted by computer games with moving pictures to learn new words.
In conclusion, although
we are aware of the potential dangers of technological involvement in children
’s lives, we cannot eliminate it from education, and teachers and parents should corporate
together to utilize Verb problem
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technology
for children
effectively.Submitted by lwinlwinthein2017 on
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