In many schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (eg. languages) and boys choose science subjects (eg. Physics). What do you think are the reasons? Do you think that this tendency should be changed?

Back in history, educational opportunities had been dedicated to males,
while
females were deprived of schooling. Even though both genders have equal access to educational opportunities these days, there are still some social pressures based on
gender
.
While
boys
are more interested in science-based majors,
whereas
girls
prefer arts disciplines. From my perspective, I believe
this
trend will be changed. On the one hand, the ability is the factor that affects their choice.
First,
girls
memorize longer than
boys
and a variety of things
such
as languages need more brain space to stay in.
In contrast
,
boys
try to follow logical puzzles
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and prefer solving MAth than sit still for mastering language grammar.
Besides
, women are considered as the ones
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to do house chores and have more spare time for making art,
while
men are known as breadwinners, who handle financial matters. Despite
this
thing happening a decade ago, people still believe it
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a fact of life.
That is
the reason why,
boys
usually improve their science background, and
girls
are the best choice for making art.
As a consequence
, these
gender
inequalities have been inherited from generation to generation, as a type of stereotype.
However
, these things depend on their ability and strengths. In
this
era, as more information people can approach through Internet gates, more tendency might be changed.
For instance
, in the past, women thought cooking and sewing skills were a must for them because the
gender
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and mindsets at that time affected them. But now,
gender
is no longer a barrier to subject choice, though, since we can access the open-minded option and think more freely now.
As a consequence
, we have the right to select whatever we desire based only on our preferences. In conclusion, those stereotypes still remain these days,
this
trend should be changed by raising awareness of equality. Since
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there is no difference between
girls
and
boys
in choosing their path.
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