You are interested in applying for a new position at your company but have some questions. Write a letter to you boss. In your letter include: Which position you are considering What questions you have about it How your boss can help you decide whether or not to apply

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Dear Sir ,

This

is Mee Mee who is currently working as a Senior Sales Support in the Sales department. Indeed , I am writing

this

letter to reveal my enthusiasm regarding the new position opening in the Engineering department.

To begin

with ,

this

new vacancy literally appeals to me . Being an Engineering graduate , I was very eager to work in that department since I joined your company.

However

, HR requested me to join

first

in a Sales position because of my 5 years employment history.

Moreover

, he agreed with me to make an internal transfer whenever there is opened a place.

Accordingly

, I have come up with some questions about that matter. I am wondering about the salary offer and fringe benefits.

Then

, may I need to take internationally recognized diplomas

such

as CCNA and CCNP ?

Finally

, I would like to get a bit of advice from you . Honestly , I am really in the tug of war in my mind.

Therefore

, being a very experienced and talented employer , could you please give me a hand on whether I should change my direction or not. Looking forward to your kind suggestion. Yours faithfully, Mee Mee

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You are interested in applying for a new position at your company but have some questions. Write a letter to you boss. In your letter include: Which position you are considering What questions you have about it How your boss can help you decide whether or not to apply

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