Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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The art of
music
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is universal. According to some
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people
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it is a nice way to unite individuals of various cultures and ages together.
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, I strongly believe
music
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has that kind of magical power which helps in eliminating
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differences and aids in developing a strong bond between
people
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of different communities and generations.
Music
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has
potential
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the potential
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to purify our
mind
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and soul. It plays a very vital role in bringing
people
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from different countries together despite
of
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their caste, creed or race.
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, whenever
national
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the national
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anthem of different countries
are
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is
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played in
world
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the world
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olympic
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games, each and every single person out their
stand
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stands
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and
pay
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pays
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respect to that song regardless of the fact to which country they belong.
Now a days
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different reality shows are being telecasted , one
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platform is Americas got talent where contestants from various countries perform live
music
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and
this
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is one of the best examples of the fact how
music
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has been
successfull
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successful
successfully
to unite different communities.
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Similarly
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music
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has
capability
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the capability
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to
dimnish
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diminish
generation
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the generation
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gap between
people
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.
For
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instance
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weddings, whenever
music
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is played, everyone follows the beat and
enjoy
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enjoys
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whether children, youngsters, adults or elderly
people
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.
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, undoubtedly due to
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age
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the age
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gap the ideas of different generations do not meet but
music
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gives immense pleasure to all and
thus
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helps to
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them together. To summarize when we listen to
music
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age
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does not matter, it brings happiness to all equally and somehow directly or indirectly plays a major part in bringing everyone together. So, in
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music
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cherishishes
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cherishes
all and
bring
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brings
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contentment to everyone
inspite
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in spite
of
the
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age
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, different communities,
religions
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and religions
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. It helps in developing a strong and everlasting bond among all
people
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.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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