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Should parents limit how much time children spend on tech devices? Explain your view and give examples from your own experience.

#parents #limit #time #children #tech #devices
Currently
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 we are living
times
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 when it is
such
 a rare circumstance to use electronic
devices
 in our society.
However
, I think parents ought to limit children’s time
to use
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using
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 tech
devices
 (like mobile
phone
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phones
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,
computer
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computers
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, etc.). In my experience, when I was 7 years old, I used to
using
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Tablet
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 PC to watch education programs on Youtube. But it was too easy to addict. Because it is pretty simple for a child to approach other interesting topics.
For example
, my mother wanted me for watching
education
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 things, so she played a study video. But after the ending, I clicked another video and I looked
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hours. It was on my way to cell phone addiction. After that time, my parents used to limit me when I was using technology
devices
. In spite of these considerations, it is
also
 possible to make the opposite case. Someone
say
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 that restricting children when using electronic
devices
 rather
obstruct
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 learning.
In addition
, hinder
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 expansion of knowledge. In conclusion, I believe that both arguments have their disadvantage. Judging from my experience, I tend to believe that parents have to limit their children’s
using
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 time. Because the children are not easy to control oneself.
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