Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the modern ,World we have many Choices

hence

if you are doing any particular activities most people trust there are variant options. I completely agree with

this

statement.

Firstly

, Education Sector there are numerous choices apply available ,especially in Technology platforms earlier specialization was limited

as a result

of modernization education stream vastly changed

consequently

people can explore varieties it will help to develop a better professional career. Political Views and aspects totally changed these days before people force to follow a certain leader and vote for the specified candidate undoubtedly everyone goes with their preferences without demands

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Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

99 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The cost of electricity for the average household is increasing in many countries. What are the causes of this phenomenon? What are the possible solutions?

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