Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subject that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

Society, without any doubt, is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindsets of different
people
.
Therefore
,
this
has become a debatable issue whether
students
should
study
what
interest
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them or they should choose only those
subjects
that will be helpful in the
future
. In
this
essay, I will not give both perceptions but
also
my point of view will be given in the conclusion. To commence with the
first
notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favour.
First
of all, many
people
think
university
students
should opt for
subjects
they are
interesting
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in.
This
is because pressure from studies
are
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causing depression and anxiety in
university
students
, so
people
believe that if they
study
whatever they like would less
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. To exemplify, a survey which was held
in
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the
University
of Wollongong in Australia shows that
students
who choose majors according to their preferences are leading more joyful and happy life than those who do not. Moving
towards
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the
second
argument of
this
debate, the
first
point is that, some
people
argue that
students
should only opt for
subjects
that will be significant in
future
such
as science and technology
subjects
.
This
is due to the fact that these
subjects
will have
scoope
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scope
in
future
. Apart from
this
, if
students
choose to
study
subjects
like science and IT, they will get better jobs and salaries in
future
.
For instance
, it has been in 2016 that
students
who studied science
subjects
have
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work environment and income per annum than those who choose to
study
other
subjects
. In conclusion, those
students
who prefer to
study
subjects
they like
lead less
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depressing life but those
students
who opt to
study
subjects
that will have
scoope
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scope
in
future
will have
settled
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future
.
Although
I think
university
students
should
study
subjects
they like, I believe they should consider
subjects
that will be useful in
future
as well.
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