Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music
is
one
of the essential parts of every culture. There is a popular belief that it helps to unite
people
of different generations, ethnicity and age.
Although
music
can be useful in strengthening social ties, I assume that nowadays
music
become a thing of the taste. On the
one
hand,
music
undeniably plays a big role in improving social interaction, since all the events are accompanied by it. In most the
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cultures there are pretty similar tunes for
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particular
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,
such
as weddings, birthdays and even funerals.
Moreover
, in recent years globalisation has
also
influenced the
music
industry and show business. Having online platforms,
such
as Spotify, Deezer, Netflix and others, in access provides
people
from all over the globe with the same listening and watching experience.
This
makes it easier for individuals from different backgrounds to engage in society and make acquaintances and friends without any struggles.
On the other hand
,
music
is
one
of the intimate and truly personal things that
one
can enjoy.
Music
is often associated with important events of
one
's life and brings with
itself
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a cosy feeling of nostalgia, which is not actually shared with most of the
people
around.
That is
why sometimes parents do not share the
music
taste of their children and vice versa.
In addition
, most of the
music
platforms are trying to learn the
music
preferences of the listeners and suggest songs that will be definitely enjoyed.
This
is the main factor why
music
has become
such
individualized nowadays. In conclusion,
music
still is the factor that brings
people
together, but nowadays it has a tendency to be more personal.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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