The best way to educate children is by using Internet in every lesson.To what extent do you share this option?What other ways are there of making lessons effective for children?

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all are concerned about children’s education,
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they seek the best method for academic teaching.
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youth prefer digital learning due to their interest
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computers and online gathering.We as parents have to review
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and disadvantages of using
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in education.
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it is generally accepted that it could be a very good option for youngster learning due to
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availability even in
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that may not have any experienced one.
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they could be able to reach
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information about their topic from specialized persons,
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they would be allowed to share their problems with others worldwide not only limited to their teachers.
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when a teacher is incapable to solve
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problem,students can search
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.In spite of these benefits,there seem to be a number of
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associated with
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,the most significant of which is that children would be unsociable.They do not need to communicate with peers and others.
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their health.
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most of the time they are sitting on
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behind the computer with
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effects and sounds and lights,without breathing fresh air and doing sports,
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leading to obesity and cardiovascular diseases in adulthood. Turning to possible alternatives probably the most effective solution would be a combined method of teaching.For practical lessons, from chemistry to biology they would profit from equipped labs,dissecting dead animals,growing various plants,field
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to different climates and it could be very interesting for students.Alternatively for theoretical subjects
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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