Nowadays, people are spending increasingly large amounts of money on their marriage parties. Many people feel large and expensive weddings cause problems for the bride and groom. Do you agree? Use personal examples in your response
Currently, in an overconnected world, appearance is necessary, increasing costs and enlarging
celebration
's participants. Because of it, it is argued that weddings
are getting more costly and massive than ever, implying problematic circumstances for the celebrating couple. In my opinion, this
statement is correct, increasing average celebration
expenses and sucumbing
Correct your spelling
succumbing
from
social pressure.
Change preposition
to
Firstly
, the entire wedding celebration
has been getting pricey and more exigent. Weddings
anteriorly were only celebrations where share mutual love with your couple and family. As result, the
Change preposition
of the
proffesionalization
of Correct your spelling
professionalization
professionalisation
sector's
workers, Correct article usage
the sector's
weddings
started to be multitudinary events, having their own topics from an extensive catalogue, purposing the bride and groom as their principal actors. To illustrate, in Spain are popular the "ibicenca
" Correct your spelling
licence
weddings
, placed on the beach or at an exotic place, also
with open air
celebrations and strict dressing Add a hyphen
open-air
paterns
that have to be followed to participate.
Correct your spelling
patterns
Additionally
, social media is an important focus of criticisms where you can be exposed. Due to its toxicity, social media users normally tries
to content their followers. Correct subject-verb agreement
try
In addition
, having to invite extra people to satisfy their critics, increasing
their expenses. Wrong verb form
increases
For example
, in my family recently my cousin got engaged with his girlfriend and publicated their compromise, owing to it, they had to double their expected attendants and , consequently
, incrementating
their wedding costs renting a bigger Correct your spelling
incrementing
celebration
place.
To conclude, weddings
are getting obviously expensive, mainly as a consequence of social media and its conversion from a
ancient tradition to a flashy Change the article
an
celebration
where
is intended to show your perfect day.Correct word choice
that
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