Nowadays, people are spending increasingly large amounts of money on their marriage parties. Many people feel large and expensive weddings cause problems for the bride and groom. Do you agree? Use personal examples in your response

Currently, in an overconnected world, appearance is necessary, increasing costs and enlarging

celebration

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's participants. Because of it, it is argued that

weddings

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are getting more costly and massive than ever, implying problematic circumstances for the celebrating couple. In my opinion,

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statement is correct, increasing average

celebration

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expenses and

sucumbing

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succumbing

from

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social pressure.

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, the entire wedding

celebration

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has been getting pricey and more exigent.

Weddings

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anteriorly were only celebrations where share mutual love with your couple and family. As result,

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proffesionalization

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professionalization

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sector's

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workers,

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started to be multitudinary events, having their own topics from an extensive catalogue, purposing the bride and groom as their principal actors. To illustrate, in Spain are popular the "

ibicenca

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licence

"

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, placed on the beach or at an exotic place,

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with

open air

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celebrations and strict dressing

paterns

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patterns

that have to be followed to participate.

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, social media is an important focus of criticisms where you can be exposed. Due to its toxicity, social media users normally

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to content their followers.

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, having to invite extra people to satisfy their critics,

increasing

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their expenses.

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, in my family recently my cousin got engaged with his girlfriend and publicated their compromise, owing to it, they had to double their expected attendants and ,

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,

incrementating

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incrementing

their wedding costs renting a bigger

celebration

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place. To conclude,

weddings

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are getting obviously expensive, mainly as a consequence of social media and its conversion from

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ancient tradition to a flashy

celebration

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where

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is intended to show your perfect day.