People in society work in many different settings, and for a variety of reasons. What do you think is the main reason why people have jobs? to feel happier about their lives to develop new skills Use specific examples and details to support your answer.

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nowadays everybody is engaged in some
work
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, whether it is, a profession, a business, their own
work
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for the various reasons. I believe that people do jobs to feel happier about their lives. I feel
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way for two reasons, good utilization of time, and for networking, which I will explore in
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essay. to commence with, I personally feel that, I should always use my time in some constructive way and
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learn new stuff during the process. doing
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job
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a job
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of my own choice is always a prerequisite thing for me. As
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will always
gives
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me
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satisfaction
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doing
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. my own experience is a compelling example of
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, after
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joining
doing
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appointment, I was not getting
interest
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in the
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I was given.
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, just after, six months I decide to change it. for
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, I have to wait three months for my desired service.
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those three
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I daily wish to go out and do some
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. I
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make myself busy
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reading
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a book
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book
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books
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,
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painting, and watching television, but
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I miss the official working part
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my life. that phase
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me realize the importance of having a
job
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.
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, is the networking with new folk and communicating with our
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colleague
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daily, is the best part of doing a
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.
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way we learn a lot. mine was
public
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department, have
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to meet, and talk to new folk daily, which
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enhance my communication skills.
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, during
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job
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our job
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we
does
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not only
got
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the working opportunity, but we
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learn, improve
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ourselves
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. when I was not working I was missing
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a lot.
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, I feel that because of
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working
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a working
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environment, now I feel free to talk with new people,and I make friends easily now.
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, during the interview for my
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post, I give all the
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very frankly and with confidence. in a nutshell, I strongly believe that the opportunity of learning new things and communication with new people are the best things we get in our
work
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sense of purpose
  • life satisfaction
  • meaningful work
  • personal and professional growth
  • versatile and adaptable
  • financial stability
  • basic and beyond-basic needs
  • emotional well-being
  • social bonds
  • sense of community
  • recognition and status
  • self-esteem
  • professional setting
  • promotions and awards
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