Today, TV channels broadcast men’s sports shows more than women’s sport shows. Why is this the case? Should TV channels give equal showtime for each?

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Sports

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channels

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or shows

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are

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one of the most prominent

channels

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to watch and especially

men

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sports

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are

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its

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own league than most

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apply

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the

women

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sports

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shows. In the following essay, I will discuss the following statement. From the evaluation of

sports

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shows on tv

channels

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men's

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have featured in most of the shows. The awareness of

women

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athletes towards the game had very less impact and

this

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can be because of various

reason

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and few reasons are stereotype behaviour towards

women

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thinking they are mostly good with household chores, organizing and

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it depends on the sponsors of the game or tournament that allows

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excessive access towards

a larger

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larger viewers

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viewers

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Indian

Women

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's cricket

team

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has been around for a while and they had an opportunity to appear on the

sports

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channels

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after a decade until

recent

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world cup in 2011

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was because they grabbed lots of attention on social media

platform

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which helped them to gain more popularity. Yes, it is highly recommended to showcase even

women

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sports

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on their

channels

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on a regular basis.

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will help

viewers

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to accept that

women

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also

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play good

sports

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from time to time and can break the stereotype thinking. And

channels

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should

also

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give equal showtime for both the categories

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will allow

viewers

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to have constant updates on the

sports

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for both

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men

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and

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women

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teams. But

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always depends on what

sports

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means

mens

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men

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women

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play. For example: The Indian Hockey

Team

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, especially the

men

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team

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, has fewer

viewers

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than the Indian cricket

team

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which makes it even more difficult to watch

women

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's hockey teams on their channel. To conclude,

sports

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is one of the popular

channels

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to watch on any

platforms

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platform

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. Both

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men

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men's

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and

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women

women's

womens

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channel

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channels

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should be

boardcasted

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broadcasted

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regular

interval

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and

also

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have to be promoted on a larger scale with

right

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the right

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approach I think in

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the next

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few years

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women's

women

womens

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sport

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sports

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shows

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shoes

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will be a good contender for

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men's

mens

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men's

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shows.

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Today, TV channels broadcast men’s sports shows more than women’s sport shows. Why is this the case? Should TV channels give equal showtime for each?

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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people suggest that the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary forgovernments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disgaree with this opinion ?

Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that Art gives our lives meaning and purpose. Others believe that it is merely a distraction from real life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.