Today, TV channels broadcast men’s sports shows more than women’s sport shows. Why is this the case? Should TV channels give equal showtime for each?

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Sports

channels

or shows

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are

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one of the most prominent

channels

to watch and especially

men

sports

are

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its

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their

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own league than most

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apply

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the

women

sports

shows. In the following essay, I will discuss the following statement. From the evaluation of

sports

shows on tv

channels

men's

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men

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have featured in most of the shows. The awareness of

women

athletes towards the game had very less impact and

this

can be because of various

reason

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reasons

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and few reasons are stereotype behaviour towards

women

thinking they are mostly good with household chores, organizing and

also

it depends on the sponsors of the game or tournament that allows

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apply

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excessive access towards

a larger

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larger viewers

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viewers

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Indian

Women

's cricket

team

has been around for a while and they had an opportunity to appear on the

sports

channels

after a decade until

recent

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world cup in 2011

and

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this

was because they grabbed lots of attention on social media

platform

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platforms

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which helped them to gain more popularity. Yes, it is highly recommended to showcase even

women

sports

on their

channels

on a regular basis.

This

will help

viewers

to accept that

women

also

play good

sports

from time to time and can break the stereotype thinking. And

channels

should

also

give equal showtime for both the categories

this

will allow

viewers

to have constant updates on the

sports

for both

men

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men's

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and

women

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women's

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teams. But

this

always depends on what

sports

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means

mens

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men

show examples

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women

womens

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women

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play. For example: The Indian Hockey

Team

, especially the

men

team

, has fewer

viewers

than the Indian cricket

team

which makes it even more difficult to watch

women

's hockey teams on their channel. To conclude,

sports

is one of the popular

channels

to watch on any

platforms

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platform

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. Both

men

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men's

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and

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women

women's

womens

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women's

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channel

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channels

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should be

boardcasted

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broadcasted

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regular

interval

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intervals

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and

also

have to be promoted on a larger scale with

right

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the right

a right

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approach I think in

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the next

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few years

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women's

women

womens

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women's

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sport

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sports

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shows

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shoes

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will be a good contender for

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men's

mens

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men's

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shows.

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Today, TV channels broadcast men’s sports shows more than women’s sport shows. Why is this the case? Should TV channels give equal showtime for each?

Your opinion

some people find it beneficial to send young children to nursery school before they go to primary school. while others think that it is good to keep them with their family. discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that mobile phones and other electronic devices have no places in the classroom. To what extent you agree or disagree?

More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.