Today, TV channels broadcast men’s sports shows more than women’s sport shows. Why is this the case? Should TV channels give equal showtime for each?

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channels
or shows
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one of the most prominent
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to watch and especially
men
's
sports
are
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its
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own league than most
of
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the
women
's
sports
shows. In the following essay, I will discuss the following statement. From the evaluation of
sports
shows on tv
channels
,
men's
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have featured in most of the shows. The awareness of
women
athletes towards the game had very less impact and
this
can be because of various
reason
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reasons
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and few reasons are stereotype behaviour towards
women
thinking they are mostly good with household chores, organizing and
also
it depends on the sponsors of the game or tournament that allows
an
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excessive access towards
a larger
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larger viewers
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viewers
.
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Indian
Women
's cricket
team
has been around for a while and they had an opportunity to appear on the
sports
channels
after a decade until
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world cup in 2011
and
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this
was because they grabbed lots of attention on social media
platform
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platforms
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which helped them to gain more popularity. Yes, it is highly recommended  to showcase even
women
's
sports
on their
channels
on a regular basis.
This
will help
viewers
to accept that
women
also
play good
sports
from time to time and can break the stereotype thinking. And
channels
should
also
give equal showtime for both the categories
this
will allow
viewers
to have constant updates on the
sports
for both
men
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and
women
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women's
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teams. But
this
always depends on what
sports
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means
mens
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or
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women
womens
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women
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play. For example: The Indian Hockey
Team
, especially the
men
's
team
, has fewer
viewers
than the Indian cricket
team
which makes it even more difficult to watch
women
's hockey teams on their channel.    To conclude,
sports
is one of the popular
channels
to watch on any
platforms
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platform
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. Both
men
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men's
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and
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women
women's
womens
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women's
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channel
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channels
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should be
boardcasted
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broadcasted
on
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at
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regular
interval
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intervals
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and
also
have to be promoted on a larger scale with
right
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approach I think in
next
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the next
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few years
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women's
women
womens
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women's
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sport
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sports
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shows
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will be a good contender for
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men's
mens
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men's
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shows.
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