With an increasing population communicating via internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past. To what extend do you agree?

In
this
concurrent world, it is
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issue that online
communication
popularity
increases and traditional
communication
would
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outdated. Some
people
concur that the internet and text messaging are better than
face
to
face
communication
.
However
, I quibble
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them and propound that traditional
communication
will never lose its
popularity
. On the one hand, adequate
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are obtainable to substantiate the concept of
face
to
face
is a good way
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communication
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in
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some
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situation. The top-notch concrete reason is a special day. On the birthday
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relatives
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via
internet
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is not natural and
cause
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destruct relationship and
therefore
internet
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is not important in
this
situation. Another rationale which hauls me to patron is outdoor activities.
People
prefer going to the gym,
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and
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and
hence
during these activities is not normal to communicate
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other via digital communications.
On the other hand
, the public in general trend to distinguish that some apps are
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way to communicate and live
communication
popularity
reduces which has multifarious reasons. To commence with, some
people
deem that the digital world is created and
population
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spend
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quality time in
this
world and they do not need
face
to
face
communication
.
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population
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a
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new land and homes.
People
will speak and send gifts digitally in the metaverse. In conclusion, I reiterate that there are innumerable strong factors supporting live
communication
that will never lose their
popularity
.
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contrary can be overlooked or controlled.
Consequently
, I firmly disagree traditional
communication
will become a thing of the past.
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