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In some countries, a foreign language is taught at primary schools. Do the advantages of learning a new language outweigh the disadvantages?

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In a few countries,
children
 are taught
a
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non-native
languages
 at their entry-level education. There are a vast number of merits to
this
 trend which overweigh the demerits. In
this
 essay, I shall discuss both pros and cons of
this
 debating topic to support my opinion. To commence with, the benefits of learning other foreign
languages
 by
children
 in schools will provide them with a wider range of job opportunities.
For Instance
, English is a global
language
 and almost all multi-national companies look for candidates who are good at the
language
.
In addition
 to
this
, when the
children
 grow up and move to other states, it would be easy for them to overcome
language
 barriers.
Moreover
, when
children
 are introduced to other non–native
languages
 at a very young
age
 they might develop a new interest in the
language
. On the other side,
few
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 kids who are not capable of learning many new things at a time might end up getting confused and may lose interest in their studies in the long run which will affect their education in a bad way. Some people may not find it useful to learn the other medium of communication at
such
 an
age
 and they believe that their pupils are just being snowed up with lots of burdens which is not necessary at that
age
. To conclude, I opine that there are more positive aspects in teaching the kids at a young
age
with
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other
languages
, as it helps them in finding a good job and helps their interaction with others easy when they move abroad. There are a few negative aspects too like
children
 getting confused and ending up losing interest in studies and can be ignored because when
children
 are taught properly, they will not face the issues.
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