You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter - explain why you think you would be suitable for the job, - say what else you could do for the family, - give your reasons for wanting the job

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Dear Mr and Mrs Jeffery, My name is Jane, an international student studying at the University of Sydney, and I am writing
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letter to express my
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to be a
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teacher for your two
kids
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. I believe I am an eligible candidate and I believe I have the capacity to teach
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Chinese
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effectively, which means your
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can manage a language in months, not years. I am confident because I am a high achieving student with a 3.75 GPA and I have managed to learn Spanish in 6 months.
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, I have half a year's experience teaching an 8-year-old girl
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before and she managed the 'pinyin', i.e., the pronunciation, as well as the grammar quickly.
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teaching
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, I am
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good at singing.
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, if I am hired, I could
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teach your
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how to sing
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songs, which is
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an intriguing approach to learning a language. The main reasons that I want
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job are that I feel I am quite suitable for
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position and I enjoy spending time with
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.
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, even though I do not really care about the salary, the job could help me to pay back my student loan. Looking forward to your reply! Jane
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • TESOL certification
  • Experience in teaching children
  • Knowledge of Australian culture
  • Passion for language education
  • Flexible and adaptable
  • Design customized lesson plans
  • Patient and understanding
  • Strong communication skills
  • Interpersonal skills
  • Participate in family activities
  • Enthusiasm for cultural exchange
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