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Some people believe that universities should only accept students with high marks. Others think that students of all ages and abilities levels should be able to attend universities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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These days some universities have a lot of demands to let
people
 get on. So, some
people
 think
that is
 the right resolution to just accept students with high degrees. While the other belief is that individuals how are want to
study
 of the different ages and opportunities should be able to
study
 what they want.
This
 debatable issue and
this
 essay will discuss both sides and will draw my conclusion. On one hand, workers in the universities are busy, so why do they need to take
people
 with lower marks that could make the work harder for them.
For example
, might they take fewer markets because they are less able to take responsibility in the
study
 place? so, they have had more than ten years to be good enough, know time for a new level of
study
 and a new way to understand the information.
On the other hand
, age and past marks do not mean they are incapable to be successful in the university. To illustrate, someone could have a problem completing his or her
study
 and after that period that person wants to get back studying but they refused it because the age,
moreover
, some old
people
 have a lot of knowledge and fast acceptable brain than the younger generation.
Hence
 the belief that all of these things do not matter at all
besides
 the abilities in that section of the university need it.
In addition
, the methods in the
first
 ten years are limited which is why a lot of
people
 get awful results and humans-personality is kind of different.
For instance
, someone who likes Math while the other one hates it and bearing that until finding their favourite specialization in the university and that a huge mistake if they look at the degree without knowing where it is coming from.
This
 proves clearly that. In conclusion, after a careful analysis of both points views, I believe that both of the sides have a correct point
such
 as the marks could help them to manage the time very well beside if they just want the higher scores that are wrong.
Furthermore
, the age absolutely of studies unnecessary more than how much does has passion.
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