The government is spending alot of money life on other planets. Some people think that the government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problem of the public. To what extent do you agree

The huge amount of money spent on

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of extraterrestrial life by the authorities

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of major concern to

people

. Some individuals argue that

this

is misspending, and the finance should be used to find

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solution

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to difficulties faced by the citizenry. Personally, I believe both are important.

To begin

with,

expending

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funds to research

on

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other

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world

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would be beneficial to the populace in two ways .

Firstly

, it could provide employment opportunities for those that study geographical science in

such

a country .

This

is because they would be allowed to

also

participate in the research findings, and

as a result

, secure employment with the astronomical institution.

Secondly

, if a successful

findings

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is

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made on

other planet

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, it could help to proffer

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to the problem of overpopulation faced by the country.

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, scientists are now investigating whether

people

can survive on

other planet

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such

as Pluto,and if

this

is proven to be achievable,

people

will

however

migrate there ,thereby

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the number of

people

on the Earth.

Nevertheless

, the problems of the community should not be neglected because a wealthy nation is a wealthy nation. The administration should disburse equal cash to

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basic amenities for the populace

such

as

,

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provision

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of

basic

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water supply, construction of roads, good transportation services and many more. As

this

would not only impact the life of the individuals positively

,

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but

also

make the authority to have a sense of accomplishment.

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, studies revealed that

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level decreased dramatically after the

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State governor provide more employment opportunities for its

people

. In conclusion, I agree that spending a lot of cash in carrying out research on other world is beneficial to the occupants because it would add to the body of knowledge of the

people

,and

also

provide them with job opportunities .

However

, cash should

also

be disbursed to provide

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solution

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to the challenges being faced by the populace as well.