Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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A lot of students want to do an interuniversity

exchange

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doctorate to improve their CV. They will search for more developed countries with a higher educational standard and

consequently

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will have to learn new languages. As expected, learning

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new

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is not the biggest problem that the students would have to face.

The contact

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with different people and

culture

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cultures

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may influence

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process, ranging from miscommunication, loneliness and less self-confidence. As far as miscommunication goes, the most important is the fluency and not only the accuracy of the

language

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's usage. If a

person

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relies majorly on accuracy and focuses on grammar and vocabulary, they may never believe in themselves and have the courage to communicate in informal situations without their self-imposed thoughts.

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, being embarrassed to talk to a native

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leads to loneliness and less self-confidence and may prejudice the

exchange

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experience

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. The

experience

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that

exchange

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brings can not be restricted only to educational and

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learning, since personal growth, and contact with different people and cultures are

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important aspects that should be experienced.

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, there are some issues that can influence the whole international

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regarding communication, socialization, and culture. A positive and contributing factor is

traveling

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and doing the

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by yourself

such

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as going to

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new country without a known

person

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scenario

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going without a close

person

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may reflect a false impression that those difficulties would not exist anymore.

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, despite how hard the process can be, it is necessary and must be always encouraged. To summarize, living in a new country can cause some problems and difficulties

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communication, socialization, and culture.

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they can be considered big issues, they do not

last

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so long if the

person

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wants to face them. To sum up, I partially agree with the statement that living in a new place and learning a new

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can be a difficult

experience

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

linguistic proficiency
cross-cultural communication
miscommunication
social integration
linguistic alienation
cultural dissonance
language acquisition
communication breakdown
interpreter services
language courses
bilingualism
multilingualism
language barrier
effective communication
cultural assimilation

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Your opinion

Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Sending people to prison is not effective, and other methods, such as community work, should be supported instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Some people think that employers should not be concerned about how employees dress at work, but the quality of work only. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that hard working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the life, other people feel that other factors are important. Discuss both sides, what is your opinion?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?