A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Hello dear friend, Hope you are enjoying your holiday. I just got your Email that you are asking about camping trips. actually, I was already thinking that you should join some nature-exploring groups because of your keen interest in gardening and flora.
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, you should watch out for some possible accidents that regularly happen
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as slipping and falling when experiencing hiking for the very first time. Other than that you may need to bring some packed snacks with you because you may not find the group members' tastes similar to yours.
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but not least I recently found a new spot on
beachside
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the beachside
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just a
30-minutes-drive
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30-minute drive
away from my home, which would be awesome on these hot summer days, I was
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planning to take a trip
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summer so we can join and go there together if you want. Let me know
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about your program. see you Narges
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suitable writing tone
Try to maintain a consistent tone throughout the letter.
single idea per paragraph
Consider organizing the letter into distinct paragraphs for each main point.
complete response
You've successfully addressed all parts of the prompt.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriate and friendly.
logical structure
The letter provides clear and logical reasons for enjoying a camping holiday and potential disadvantages, making it informative and useful.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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