some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that the

environment

is being threatened like never before.

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some people believe that the extinction of some animals and plants is the most important threat facing the

environment

at

this

moment. I would argue that there are more urgent matters to consider. In

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I will discuss both views, and give my own explanation for supporting the latter. On the one hand, those who believe that the biodiversity crisis is currently the main obstacle facing the

environment

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might claim that it causes disturbance in the food chain, which eventually leads to an unbalanced ecosystem.

For instance

, if a predator goes extinct, its prey may malignantly proliferate, harming the

environment

. While

this

could sometimes be the case, there are more pressing environmental issues to consider.

On the other hand

, my view is that we have far more crucial troubles at the moment.

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as

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climate changes and global warming. The reason for

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is that they not only affect the

environment

but

also

are contributing factors

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some animal and plant extinction. To illustrate, the alarming elevation in today's average global temperatures is damaging the

environment

while simultaneously endangering many habitants of forests and sea, who are not able to adapt to

such

weather.

Furthermore

, It is almost impossible to save all remaining species without providing them with suitable conditions. To conclude, our

environment

is dealing with many problems, one of them is the danger of extinction of some animals and plants. But I strongly believe that

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in order to save those plants and animals we

first

need to resolve other more dreadful concerns,

such

as climate

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and global warming.