You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer . In your letter , Say how you feel about his performance Give details of your musical activities Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

Dear Sir ,
This
is Mee Mee , one of your big fans who attended your concert
last
week . Actually , I am very thrilled to write
this
letter to my
favorite
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singer . Specifically, I had dreamed to feel your singing and performance, and
this
was my
first
time
to see
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your show in person. You sang fabulously and I really faded into your performance which made my heart melt. Honestly , I forgot to
breath
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and blink my eyes while you were passing through the stage. Indeed , since I was a kid , I was literally crazy about everything with you . You can hit perfectly pop songs as well as rock music. Being an amateur , I usually entertain in the community
center
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located in my province. As I am a music fanatic , I
also
practice by watching your uploaded videos
from
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YouTube.
Although
I could sing a light tone effortlessly, I am weak at high pitches. Could you please let me know how to handle my vocal tone? It would very nice if you arrange a
fan-meeting
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to share your journey. Looking forward to your kind reply. Yours sincerely, Mee Mee
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