Modern lifestyles are completely different from the way people lived in the past. Some people think that changes have been very positive, while others believe they have been negative. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion.
Over the past decades, the world has evolved in numerous ways, especially in
people
's lifestyles. The lifestyles nowadays are totally different to
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compared
with the past. Change the form of the verb
compare
However
, there are some who have different views about this
. Some people
believe it brings positive effects, while others argue that it might have more disadvantages than benefits. The arguments on both sides of this
controversial issue will be discussed in the following paragraphs in turn, and finally
, my opinion will be given.
On the one hand, some opponents are quick to point out that there are various reasons to consider getting advantages of the modern lifestyle. Before all else, today's people
can do anything what
they want with ease because of technological advancements. Correct pronoun usage
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For example
, they can do ordering food and online
shopping effortlessly with Add a missing verb
do online
a
mobile without going out physically. Remove the article
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Moreover
, in terms of health issues, improvement
of modern medicines can cure severe diseases. It is impossible to get Correct article usage
the improvement
this
kind of chance in the past.
On the other hand
, other proponents have also
expressed an equal view that there are several drawbacks to the current world's lifestyle. On top of everything, instead
of giving family time, people
tend to use social media a lot. Even in
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of
their social accounts. Despite the fact that the Change preposition
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important
of modern technologies is undeniable in our daily lifestyles, we cannot neglect the pure pleasure we got in the past without the distractions of mobile screens. Replace the word
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Besides
, young people
nowadays lacks
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lack
exercises
, and they are keen to stay in a sedentary lifestyle. Fix the agreement mistake
exercise
As a result
, they have to confront serious health problems, like the
obesity.
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although
we have some disadvantages and weaknesses, I passionately believe that the advantages of today's living styles will outshine their drawbacks.Submitted by tunnaungwin11 on
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