Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays,

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have been facing a great deal of serious environmental problems like pollution, natural disasters, and the risk of extinction of some types of animals. A statement says that most

people

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do not care enough about environmental issues. Personally, I totally agree with

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statement. The

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issue is that

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do not care about increasingly using public transport or choosing kinds of private vehicles consuming renewable energy like electric cars. The more using private vehicles the more greenhouse gas emissions.

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can lead to air pollution and serious greenhouse impacts on our planet.

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, most countries keep on accessing an enormous amount of non-renewable energy sources which is the main cause of global warming and climate change these days. The consumption rate of renewable power sources

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as solar power, wind power,...is still far smaller than fossil fuel sources.

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have not cared about recycling waste. It is evident that most governments have not issued any recycling policies and guidelines in order to encourage citizens to focus on recycling waste.

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seem still less concerned about some endangered species threatened with extinction. Indeed, there are not any effective measures to protect the endangered species against poaching until now.

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, their habitat gradually is destroyed because of humans’ invasion for expanding their living space. In conclusion,

people

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’s awareness of environmental issues is still low over the world

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natural disasters which are the serious consequence of these green matters have been occurring far more frequently and critically. Governments should give a call to build up a green planet for our future generations.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

264 words

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