Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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such
as study and work
, from the comfort of our own homes. I believe that is
a positive development.
First
of all, if we do not need to go out to work
or study, we can save a tremendous amont
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amount
time
that would be waisted
in traffic jams or in crowded public transportation, Correct your spelling
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spending
time
with family, exercising or taking care of houlsehold
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this
. In 2020, my boss asked me to work
from home for 6 months while they made an office renovation. I saved 2 hours in my day and that gave me the opportunity to start working out and finally
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benefiting everyone. A primer example is the" online ballet academy of little angels". Replace the word
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lower price and give Change the word
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to many girls who would never have Add an article
the possibility
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conditions
to pay for a traditional school of ballet.
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work
and study from home and because of that we can save time
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