You recently received a letter from a friend asking for your advice on whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/ she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why she will not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea Suggest the type of job that would be suitable.

Dear friend, I hope
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letter finds you well. I recently received the letter in which you asked for advice on whether to join college or apply for a job. On the one hand, college can be a great experience for some, but I feel it is not the best fit for you.
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, from what I know about your interests and skills, you will likely sit through long lectures and complete assignments that require time and energy to complete.
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, college life
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gives a study and financial burden.
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, getting a job could be a fantastic opportunity for gaining real-life experiences, exploring interests, and becoming financially independent.
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the early start of business, it has a plethora of benefits
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as early success, great knowledge, and deep fortune. Moving
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, I would like to suggest to you some jobs which I think would be the best options for you.
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, office administration is a good suggestion
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your ability, and it will be a better option to earn a good amount of money and fame.
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, working at the gas station is
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suitable for you because of your customer service and communication skills. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Manpreet Kaur

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Task Response
Consider providing more specific examples or personal anecdotes to strengthen your points, particularly regarding why college would not be enjoyable for your friend.
Coherence
Try to ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea and flows smoothly into the next. This will help improve clarity and coherence.
Coherence
Make sure to use varied sentence structures to enhance your writing style and keep the reader engaged.
Task Achievement
You maintained a friendly and supportive tone throughout the letter, which is appropriate given your relationship with the recipient.
Task Achievement
Your suggestions for job options showcased your understanding of your friend's skills and interests, which adds a personal touch to your advice.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic pressures
  • financial burdens
  • tuition
  • student loans
  • uncertainty
  • work experience
  • earn money
  • practical skills
  • professional network
  • align with interests
  • growth opportunities
  • on-the-job training
  • apprenticeships
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