Some People think that old buildings should be knocked down to make way for new buildings. Others, however, believe that old buildings should be protected. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

With the development of society, more and more

people

move to metropolises for better education, medical service, and most importantly, various job opportunities. With the overcrowded population,

people

have different views

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in urban areas. Some

people

think that old

buildings

should be demolished to make room for new constructions. With a rapidly growing population in big cities, dismantling old

buildings

provides vacant land for high-rise

buildings

and increases the utilization rate of urban space.

As a result

, some

people

might have a chance to live closer to communal facilities

such

as parks, stadiums, and museums, which makes their lives more

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and convenient.

Also

, the demolition process will make cities safer. Being long neglected and in disrepair, some old

buildings

have potential security liabilities, which is a great danger to the

people

passing by. In January 2018, several pedestrians were injured and got killed in Beijing because of the extreme weather. Fierce winds pushed down the old

buildings

, which caused these tragedies. Others argue that old

buildings

should be protected. Among all these old

buildings

, the one with historical significance still needs our protection. These historical

buildings

or ancient architectures are legacies from our ancestors. They are not only the keys to the past but

also

to the future. Meanwhile, many old

buildings

are considered to be works of art. They make cities more interesting and bring art into

people

’s daily life. Representing tradition, cultures, and arts, these divertingness old

buildings

will not only attract tourists both from domestic and overseas, but

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will

also

contribute to the local economy and create job opportunities for local communities. In my opinion, old

buildings

need to make their way for urban development, but when it comes to old building removal, many factors need to be taken into consideration. Only with specialists’ objective analysis from all perspectives can the invaluable architectures survive

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all these old building demolitions.