Some people say patriotism causes problems and is negative overall. Others feel that it is beneficial for society at large. Do the advantages of patriotism outweigh its disadvantages?

In recent years, more and more politicians have been using nationalism to gain popularity. While some
people
argue that nationalism could be advantageous for
society
, I believe that it is harmful
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citizens as well as other countries. In terms of advantages, individuals' pride
towards
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their homeland contributes to the advancement of
society
positively.
This
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patriotic citizens are more than willing to devote their time and effort to serve the country and they tend
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their country's interest before themselves. With
such
a mentality, it is much easier for
society
to achieve breakthroughs.
For instance
, China was able to achieve scientific breakthroughs and invent their
first
atomic bomb because scientists, who were involved, sacrificed two years of their time.
However
, I argue that the advantage of patriotism should be considered in light of its disadvantages. One of the repercussions is that nationalists turn a blind eye to practical problems and become obsessed with political correctness. Take the example of
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pandemic, many Americans refused to listen to China's advice to wear a mask to protect themselves because they genuinely felt that China is inferior to America.
As a result
, the death toll
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to a million.
Furthermore
, nationalism may put other countries at
risks
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. As
people
become passionate about their country, they are eager to protect their national
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interests
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.
For example
, Russia started a war with Ukraine because it predicted that if Ukraine managed to join North Atlantic Treaty Organisation, it would jeopardise Russia's interest. In the end, the war had taken thousands of lives of Ukraine
people
. In conclusion, while it is true that as more citizens become passionate
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their homeland, it will improve their
society
, I argue that there are far more downsides to
this
attitude.
This
is because being overly obsessed with their homeland will confuse
people
's judgement and pose a threat to others.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fosters
  • sense of belonging
  • strengthening societal bonds
  • instills
  • pride and loyalty
  • excessive
  • nationalism
  • intolerance
  • discrimination
  • conflict
  • blind allegiance
  • flawed policies
  • unifying force
  • crisis
  • manipulated
  • political leaders
  • division
  • advocating
  • responsibility
  • civic duty
  • engaged
  • informed citizenship
  • balanced and inclusive
  • cultural diversity
  • marginalize
  • minority groups
  • stifle dissent
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